The feedback I received and decided with my teacher was to make a number of changes again – this time changing the look of my whole poster.

  • To get rid of the location in the credits
  • To make the title “CAPTURED” bigger and move it down so it’s more noticeable
  • Change the surnames of “SPARROW” and “LOADER” to more in the middle and change the colour so they stand out more.
  • Move the slogan to under the title, and make it smaller
  • Place the http://www.captured.com to under the COMING SOON
  • Move the image of Caitlin to the side screens of the stage, and make them more opaque.